Sunday, October 25, 2009

Caption in five

Comic caption for my work. The comic was chosen for the shopping cart content (our customers are grocers/retailers). I was given 5 minutes and an injunction to come up with text for it (I think the original caption was too punchy for 'company newsletter'). My first two suggestions were nixed for space (too long) and this third was chosen.                      (Click for large)


  1. I think in the vicinity of (1) 'How the cart will stand up is interesting, but I'm honestly more intrigued by what the crash-test baby does.' and
    (2) 'The moms undergoing testing show a surprising amount of aggression once they get their hands on the cart.'